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tae
May 21, 2012 17:59:56 GMT -6

Post by tae on May 21, 2012 17:59:56 GMT -6

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He had never really entertained the possibility of dying. Perhaps, once or twice the thought had crossed his mind, but he didn't really place much care towards it, instead deciding to take another reckless dive into the seedy streets of Republic City. He may have gone out with a few war wounds: bruises, a black eye, a few nicks of here and there. But it was never like this. His warm blood pooled above his waistband before darkening his red attire. Jun didn’t realize that she had snuck around him, her quiet steps in the mist undetectable.

Like a dying animal, he swung his glove around haphazardly. Fire mixed in with the icy fog as it wailed and whined. The frenetic surge of flame stopped. Punctuated by a brisk intake of air, he felt his back being struck, all feeling disappearing from his conscious. He saw the old, worn face of his loving mother before everything became black.

Jun’s massive anatomy dropped. Slumping over onto the ground, he lay there in peace as if he was cooed to sleep. The brisk ting of her throwing knives against the ground affirmed his unconsciousness. With his arms stretched out and his legs bent at an angle, the twenty-year-old was blanketed with the unforgiving sting of the mist. His stern countenance was replaced with an almost innocent air, betraying his “warrior” attitude from before. Dark strands of hair stuck to his forehead as the rest of it was swept sideways. He was now completely helpless as his body pinned itself against his left arm, the vulnerable gauntlet resting obliviously on the pavement.
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May 21, 2012 19:39:10 GMT -6

Post by kaitokatashi on May 21, 2012 19:39:10 GMT -6

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Almost as quickly as their encounter had begun, it ended. He dropped to the ground, victim of the chi strike. Of the many tools in her arsenal, her two most valuable were her chi-blocking and fellows.

She snapped and the fog cleared with a wave of Hazen's arm, and she dropped to one knee next to the boy to study the dragon that had piqued her curiosity. Carefully, she slid it off his arm, noting with a smile that it remained almost undamaged from their battle. She had made sure of that.

"Ingenious." Her words had the same curl as her lips as she went face to face with the dragon; he might as well have been a Firebender. Making a motion with her hand, she called the Shadowhand to her side. Wolfie took the gauntlet, and the other three picked the body up. Nobody, if they knew what was good for them, would question the group, and they hoisted it up.

"Let's go." With that, the gang was off to their hideout in a warehouse on the outskirts of the district. Nobody asked questions, nobody got hurt.

((Continued in Warehouses & Apartments))
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May 23, 2012 9:34:16 GMT -6

Post by Deleted on May 23, 2012 9:34:16 GMT -6

((As you would recall, Onigumo is quite close to a chi blocker. Also, I hope I don’t get this wrong, but I remember the wall of ice being a ways down the alley.))

Is it over?


Perfect. She couldn’t have asked for a better outcome than this. His best option would have been to swipe at her and push her away before trying this. Hell, should have charged or done anything that would have force Bao Yu away that way he would have had more time to do this. Instead, by choosing to bend with a chi blocker right there, he took the risk, and unfortunately for him that wasn’t a risk he should have taken.

The young Equalist took a step back at the quick and fancy movement of her opponent. He’d fallen over and then got right back up, sure he was a bit farther away, but not far enough. With a dark smile, Bao Yu lunged straight at him. Sure, he was sending an attack her way, but she could strike first, besides, his leg was cramped, it would still hurt.

Swiftly, she leaned to her left and hopped around Onigumo’s cramped side. If it still hurt like she imagined that it would, he would turn, but not fast enough for her strike to fail. At least, that was her hope. Those dark eyes of hers narrowed, her fingers prepped for the three blows required to eliminate waterbending, and when she landed on her feet, her hands flew to their targets. Her left arm targeted a spot just around the area where the man’s arm met his shoulder, her right arm did the same, and then she quickly struck two points around his kidneys.

She should have pulled out then. Had her strikes worked, that wall of ice would melt back into water and just tumble over, but Bao Yu felt that she could still attack. It was almost like practice, there on his back she could almost, literally see the chi chart. Every point required to take out an opponent was right there, and with a huff she went for the standard four point strike and followed it up with a drop kick aimed at Onigumo’s shoulders.


It happened so quickly that he couldn’t even ready himself for it. Sharp pain, and then that familiar choking sensation. It could have struck back, but it happened too quickly, and just like that; he could make out some of the words that woman said, but in the end that slowly encroaching darkness made it all just a little bit useless. He could feel the steel wrapped around his neck, and also the spit that slowly rolled over and out of his mouth, just a little bit longer….and…he’d be out.
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Anonymous
May 23, 2012 11:30:13 GMT -6

Post by Deleted on May 23, 2012 11:30:13 GMT -6

Alley: Red Monsoon Territory


Family tradition dictated that any interesting weaponry of a fallen enemy were up for grabs as a both a trophy and a new tool they had to learn to use. It kept them weighed down with weapons but it also kept them constantly evolving their fighting style.
Tsubaki intended to evolve hers in the decapitation and limb severing direction with Chook's former modified kusarigama.

While she enjoyed her new weapon it required a great deal of trust in her enemy if she didn't intend to kill them. Tsubaki wasn't sure if she liked that.
"If I unlock this and let you go can I trust you not to do anything stupid like attack or go for help? Grunt one for 'yes' and twice for 'no, just kill me right here'."

There was no grunt at all. The Equalist decided to be optimistic and take Chook's silence as a 'yes, please don't kill me you beautiful jazz goddess and feel free to take my weapon too. I don't deserve it, for I am unable to wield it properly'.
That or he was simply unconscious. Either way was fine with Tsubaki and she released the man but stayed ready to insert any number of sharp things into him if he moved funny.

"Come on, this guy's a chump!" Tsubaki cheered from down the alley as she pulled new red overcoat tighter to cover her underwear and its prints of tiny smiling suns.


Onigumo didn't want to show how much his leg hurt. He hoped that his chi blocking nemesis couldn't read his mind and see just how close he was to cutting the damned thing off with a water blade just to end that awful cramping.
He wasn't used to chi blockers of this caliber. All the others must have been rookies or poor students. He felt like a practice dummy at that point.
But then he saw his hat resting on the unconscious body of his comrade. The man was nothing but the hat was inspiring. It was given to him the day he decided to become a gangster and it reminded him that he was more than a common thug.

The first few blows did not hurt and Onigumo's confidence soared. Then his water bending was disabled and he was a common thug. If the wall of ice he had formed hadn't melted he would have known anyway. It was his one weapon and he was helpless without it.
When Bao Yu's final blow struck Onigumo fell to his knees. He wouldn't beg or even shoot his enemy a defiant look. He just looked up at Bao Yu from his defeated position and smirked. He wasn't as good as he thought he was but he'd be damned if he wasn't going to get a rematch out of the woman.

Onigumo flopped over onto his left side a defeated but determined man before falling into unconsciousness.

Tsubaki picked up her trumpet after she finished ringing out the water from her sun dress before slinging it over her shoulder.
"Best. Night. Ever. He was all ow, ow, ow, ow, ow, my chi hurts! And you just stand there like a chi blocking badass. You need to take your test as soon as possible. I'll talk to the others." Tsubaki squealed and put her arm around Bao Yu. "We got another chi blocker," she said as if singing a song.
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May 30, 2012 21:42:04 GMT -6

Post by Deleted on May 30, 2012 21:42:04 GMT -6

The young Equalist couldn’t help but smile proudly as her friend chanted her strength. Honestly, given another situation, Bao Yu would have easily joined Tsubaki in song, but tonight wasn’t the best evening to prance around, and the situation demanded that they start moving, immediately!

“Sh!” Interjected Bao Yu, and she quickly added, “Remember, there were more than four, so come on.” With that, she headed straight for Tsubaki, and then back through the two buildings and past the spot where that wall of ice once impeded their progress. As always, Bao Yu made sure to be extra careful around here, at this hour, hell in this area there were always dangers lurking around. Quite the shame that those monsoons had to ruin her evening.

“Through here,” stated Bao Yu as she motioned for Tsubaki to follow her into an apartment complex. Bao Yu tried her best to hide the smile that still found itself on her face. It was good to hear that someone else believed in her abilities. Sure, that had been a while back, but it still meant something to her. She had spent so many years training, not just with the Equalist, but with her grandfather. Finally, someone was willing to acknowledge her skill, and potential. Still, she had to take her through this somewhat lower class building.

For sure, Tsubaki would have little trouble here. With a quick glance, she noted the lack of people in the apartment’s corridor, well, almost the lack of people. There was a young lady with a gray streak in her shoulder length hair that watched the two arrivals with a predator’s gaze, all while seated in a wooden chair and clutching The Western Tale. Bao Yu knew who this was or at least what she was doing. As such, the young Galgori gestured to the woman, who upon noticing the familiar motion stood up from her chair, and motioned the two arrivals through the door just next to her.

“Come on,” said Bao Yu glowing with excitement. Quickly, she headed to the door, opened it and entered a normal apartment. Having gone through this entrance many times before, Bao Yu entered the first door on her right, and descended a flight of stairs into a long underground tunnel which led straight the Laundromat’s underground training room.

“It’s a bit of a jog, but we can make it in about five.” Stated Bao Yu as she then took off. Oh, how she loved this.

After the run, she arrived at a wooden door, opened it and immediately smiled at the sight of the twenty Equalist there. As usual, training regiments weren’t done in groups, but rather in pairs. People trained where they were lacking, and sought advice or were given it by Equalists who knew what they were doing.

“Tsubaki, I think we came a bit late,” she stated with her tongue out. Thankfully, another Equalist arrived just as she finished talking, only this guy entered from the Laundromat entrance and not the dingy entrance they used. “Or not,” she quickly added, and then continued, “So, I hope it’s not too much in asking, but maybe you could ask someone about possibly getting me an awesome attire.” The request as delivered with her black eyes stairing at the tiled, blue floor and her index fingers being gently bumped into one another. Then, she looked up and gave her friend a shy, wide smile and looked around the rectangular room hoping to spot some higher-up among the throngs of sweaty, training Equalists.



((So, do we continue here or in the Nick nack and doodad place?))
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Jun 24, 2012 3:17:34 GMT -6

Post by duvetdemot on Jun 24, 2012 3:17:34 GMT -6

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A whiff of the stifling city air smothered Jeon's crooked nose as he meandered across the city's paved sidewalk. The inane babble of socialites and ruffians took hold of his ears, inviting in the deafening horns and engines of passing Satomobiles to force Jeon to retreat from the world ever further. Adjusting his vest as it rested upon his shoulders, Jeon browsed the throngs of citizens enclosed around him. It always amazed him to see people enjoying the little things in life, especially if their situation was hopeless. The local crime bosses were bleeding the city dry, bringing about poverty on an unheard of scale. As Jeon's cold eyes darted around the street, he noticed several gang members making their way down the boulevard, their aggressive body language expressing their intents as they turned off into an alley. Jeon smirked. He may or may not have owed them money at the moment; it was a lucky thing that they had exited the public eye or he may have been forced to ruin his new black loafers in the chase. Absentmindedly twirling a pebble of ice around his finger, Jeon continued to wander down the sidewalk, the plodding of his feet drowned by the roaring city.

For the fourth year in a row, it appeared Jeon would be out of the running for the annual Pro-Bending tournament. Failing to find a suitable team the first year had struck a blow to Jeon's ego, but he had recovered from his loss within the month. The second year caused him to take up drinking as coping mechanism, leading to a number of wild times for months to come. And his failure for a third year had seen him thrown out of no less that five taverns in one night. Currently, Jeon was on his way to a favorite beverage establishment of his on the west side of the city's downtown - it was a special occasion, after all, so why not live it up? He'd decided to go out and toast to his misery early, hoping to meet some fortunate ladies to help him forget his misfortune. Out of the corner of his eye, Jeon caught sight of another group of gang members actively scanning the crowd. With a sigh Jeon turned right onto a small side street to avoid the half dozen thugs, and found himself in a small, vibrant courtyard behind several brownstone buildings.

Ornate stone benches, gardens of exotic flowers, and several green hedge rows stood proudly before him, defying the city's call to uproot nature and replace it with towers of glass and steel. Jeon approached slowly, his countenance immediately shifting to an mask of indifference as he crossed the threshold. It was amazing that something so simple could still be beautiful when encountered. Crossing from one end of the jungle to the other, Jeon found himself resting on a cracked, gray bench facing the side street he'd entered from. Glancing around, he noticed there was even a large stone fountain on the wall adjacent to the street he was facing, appearing to feed out into the entirety of the garden through a series of hollows around the perimeter. The tiered fountain had been painted at some point, but had since lost much of its paint to time and elements. At one point, it appeared as if the bowls had been colored to be seashells, with only a few flakes of blue and orange paint clinging to the wet stone. Taking in a deep breath, Jeon took notice of the freshness of the air around him and let loose an honest smile.

Maybe he didn't need to wallow tonight... Perhaps a garden and some people watching was all he needed. And besides, the ladies could wait another day or two to meet him. The thought plastered another smirk on Jeon's face. With ice still twirling around his fingers, Jeon stared out at the throngs of people mindlessly moving about, hoping to witness something interesting to perk his day up further.
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yukari
Jun 25, 2012 15:51:45 GMT -6

Post by yukari on Jun 25, 2012 15:51:45 GMT -6

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First Encounters


It had been a long morning of training in her warehouse. By the time Yukari had left her training room, it was already passed midday. Sighing, she weaved through the streets of downtown, taking the very, very long way home. She absentmindedly wandered about, thinking of all the things she could be doing right now instead of going back home to see her parents.

One example was how she still needed to find a team for the Pro Bending Arena. She was once again, left to fend for herself. Still not having found anyone, there was no way she could even show her face there. It would simply be too humiliating, watching others stand where she should be. Or at least, wanted to be. Maybe she really wasn’t good enough, if she couldn’t even find two people willing to work with her.

Before she realized it, Yukari had strayed into a courtyard; one she had yet to discover until now. It was rather beautiful, and quite out of the way from the main roads of Republic City. It was a lucky coincidence that she had been able to stumble upon it. Perhaps she would come here more often, and sit in the peace and quiet it seemed to have.

There weren’t too many people, but still quite a few. Only one of them was not moving, though, and sitting on a bench on the far side of the courtyard, wearing a goofy smile. Yukari just raised an eyebrow at him, and stayed her distance. It wasn’t any of her business, anyways, what someone else was smiling about.

She went to look at one of the bright colored flowers on her side of the courtyard, inspecting its beauty. It really was different from the rest of downtown. She thought it was mostly thugs and gangs that grew here. She never expected to see such a pretty thing in the heart of downtown Republic City.
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Jun 25, 2012 16:23:04 GMT -6

Post by yakone on Jun 25, 2012 16:23:04 GMT -6

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Rozai could barely breath. His throat tightened, and he swallowed hard. The worried young man in simple garments appeared to be a nervous wreck. Inhaling deeply, and exhaling slowly, he tilted his driving cap slightly over his eyes, raised his collar, and slid his hands into his pockets. Moving somewhat swiftly, he did his best to act casually.

The worried individual thought to himself frantically, "Just keep moving, just keep moving, just keep moving...." Rozai's head shifted noticeably at every alleyway. He resumed his pace, lowing down only as to not attract attention. Settling at a street corner, Rozai seemed to blend in with the crowd. As the road cleared, and the crowd began to move once more, Rozai's worries began to subside.

His thoughts seemed relieved, "Almost there...almost there...just a little--" His thought process would be cut short once he bumped into a mountain of a man within his way. The towering body procured a dark smile, while a much smaller shape stood beside him. Releasing a slight squeak, Rozai's complexion melted away. The smaller cretin smiled as well, as he spoke with a hint of satisfaction, "Hello Rozai." Trying to force a smile, Rozai slowly backed away, only to hit two more firm standing ruffians. While attempting to muster a serious tone, Rozai's voice was obviously filled with fear, "Uhh...heyyy....I know this may look bad but-—" Cut short from his speech, Rozai soon found himself thrown rather harshly into the nearby alleyway.

Backed up against the cold concrete and brick, the smaller cretin's smile became a stern frown. Surrounded by his compatriots, the smaller man used his hand to groom his facial hair as he talked carefully in a condescending tone, "You know...Rozai, I don't think my boys here like it when someone fails to relinquish the required currency that he so rightfully owes....isn't that right my fine fellows?" The towering man and lackeys seemed dumbfounded by their ally's eloquence, but they quickly nodded their heads pretending to understand.

Thinking quickly, Rozai began to speak, "Yeah....about that..." With a firm movement of his legs, Rozai threw up a narrow pillar of stone, pinning the eloquent man's shirt (and him along with it) to the other side of the dank alleyway. Pushing up a sudden wall of earth to cover his escape, Rozai sprinted for his life. Screaming at his minions, the man tugged at his shirt and exclaimed, "Get him you imbeciles!"

The young Zhang did not look back, utterly believing that the ruffians would not dare to pursue him in broad daylight. This was not the case unfortunately, and Rozai's eyes widened as he increased his pace, doing his best to avoid any pedestrians. Feeling his feet give way as the ground literally rose up under him, Rozai fell face first onto the pavement, right outside a rather pleasant looking courtyard. With the two minions holding him down, the eloquent man procured a fireball, and held it up to the young man's face. With an obvious expression of rage, the man barked at the now terrified Rozai, "This time you'll wish you payed a little more respect to your elders BOY...."
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Jun 25, 2012 19:32:44 GMT -6

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From just beyond the entrance to the courtyard came a loud crash as a plainly dressed man stumbled up the side road followed by two average thugs, a small, seedy character, and what looked like a wall of muscle catching them up. Analysing the situation, Jeon noticed nothing particularly remarkable about the man on the run beside a patch of black facial hair running along his chin and a rather striking driver's cap. Before the man had a chance to react, the leftmost gangster had pulled the ground out from under him, and he and his friend were upon him, holding him down as their boss walked up slowly, flame in hand. Jeon smiled a wide, manic smile as he crossed the pebble of ice behind his back, drawing water to it from the gutter behind him. This was what he'd been looking for. A little action, a bit of drama, and all entertainment. Standing up, Jeon began walking closer as the small man pressed the flame in his hand beside the captive's face and prattled on about something or another.

Wait, a minute... I know that face...

Jeon's mind flooded with memories and information as he stared upon the short firebender's face. No name came to him, but he definitely recognized him. In fact, he had played a round of Pai Sho with the man last week at the Turtle Duck Tavern - the seedy establishment he'd been on his way to before finding this small courtyard. The short flametosser was a small time mob boss of some renown, not to mention a mean Pai Sho player in his off time. The two thugs holding down the running man seemed to be simple benders, so it was the giant behind them that gave Jeon pause. He was more monster than man, standing at well over six foot and made up of nothing but large, strained muscle, but that seemed to be the only threatening quality he possessed. But what a threat! It almost seemed a shame to knock the firebender senseless - having beat Jeon in a their round last week, he was certainly a nice challenge - but in the interest of interest, Jeon was anxious see how he fared in combat rather than simple strategy. Besides, he could get a debt out of the man on the ground if this went well.

Curling in his fingers, Jeon could feel the water condense into ice behind him, a light layer of frost forming on the inside of his palm as he pushed the temperature as low as he could get it. Then all at once, he stretched his left leg forward and pushed off of his right, throwing him into the air before he launched the ball of ice square into the miniature gang boss's jaw. In an instant, the man had been knocked onto his back a few yards away, the fire in his hand going out in a puff of smoke.

Wow... That was quick. I wonder how many bones I fractured with that hit...?

Jeon continued moving forward, the same wild grin on his face as the man's accomplices scrambled to their feet and aimed to retaliate against the waterbender's sudden attack. Their boss was behind them and out of commission, but they seemed more than happy to take on his assaulter. The two, scrappy men rushed forward, one pulling up a stone slab to launch, the other reaching back on his belt to retrieve some water to bend. Jeon's eyes flashed with brazen madness as he pulled a quick ball of water from the gutter beside the earthbender and wrapped it tightly around his neck before freezing it solid. Distracted and gasping for air, the earthbender dropped the slab to the ground. His partner turned toward him and attempted to remove the literal choker, but was promptly knocked in the back of the head by another slab of ice Jeon had bent from the fountain.

The element of surprise. Best element of all...

Unfortunately, Jeon had focused too hard on the two men and not enough on his surroundings, finding himself tossed through the air by the brutish enforcer who had followed behind the short boss. Moments later a loud rustling was heard as Jeon found himself lodged in a bush at the back of the courtyard, the large man lumbering towards him. The grin disappeared from Jeon's face as his expression became blank and the realisation of his circumstances became apparent.
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Jul 17, 2012 16:28:13 GMT -6

Post by asami on Jul 17, 2012 16:28:13 GMT -6

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Only within the last few years had Asami earned the privilege of wandering through Republic City on her own, despite having grown up there, and she reveled in the independence. Not content to remain locked away in the Sato family mansion, it was common for the girl to be seen weaving through the crowds either on foot or aboard what she fancied to be her trusty steed (though what most considered to be merely a scooter). Today, she was on foot. Her driver had dropped her off earlier that morning, and she was happy to browse through the local shops until it was time to return to their designated meeting point in order to be brought home for dinner. Surprisingly, she had yet to purchase anything. Her coin purse, tucked safely away inside her jacket, jingled softly with yuans craving to be spent; not so loudly as to draw attention, of course. Asami was many things, but never a fool.

Currently, her attention had been drawn to an elegantly crafted phonograph on display in a shop window. It was a beautiful machine: the base was smooth and clean, and someone had very clearly spent a great deal of time paying loving, detailed attention to every curve and edge. There were even a few designs carved delicately into the wood, allowing it to stand out from the rest of the phonographs. The brass horn shone brightly in the reflecting sunlight, almost blindingly so. If they didn't already have a lovely phonograph sitting at home, Asami would have considered purchasing this one. Perhaps she would anyway. The Sato mansion was, after all, considerably larger than the average place of residence. One phonograph didn't even begin to flood the entire structure with music. Still, Asami resisted. If she purchased it now, she would have to carry it with her for several hours. She could think on it and come back later if she decided that she wanted to bring it home. She took a step away from the glass window, a small section of which was now slightly fogged by her breath.

Asami turned to face the rest of the street. She was far from the only one out today. As usual, the roads of Republic City were as alive as any of the beings walking through them. A few people stood to chat with one another, shopkeepers hollered out exaggerated descriptions of their goods, and in their effort to cross to a shop across the road from them, several brave souls weaved through the Satomobiles rumbling down the street. Asami's boots clicked rhythmically against the ground as she continued down the sidewalk. Through the people rushing past her like a river on either side, she could see a small gathering not far away. Immediately, her curiosity was piqued. Her dark hair lifted slightly away from her back as she walked, and Asami uttered a "pardon me" every few seconds when someone seemed in a particular hurry to push past her.

Upon drawing closer to the crowd, she found herself scowling. She had hoped to find something interesting, but instead she found herself staring at a poster of the expressionless mask that seemed to be appearing more and more frequently around Republic City. She should have known that the only thing that could draw such attention would be Equalist propaganda.

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((OOC: Anyone is welcome to join in))

This was proving fruitless. Jing had hoped to impress Mr. Songho tomorrow by bringing back some authentic Water Tribe cloth to the shop. Unfortunately, he found out most of the Water Tribe traders wouldn't be back until the end of the week. While searching, he found himself falling even more in love with the city. He was meeting with many different people from lands and towns he had never heard of. Even with the apparent air of crime that this district produced, Jing found it to be one of his favorite areas of Republic City.

Since he hadn't eaten, he stopped at one of the hot food stalls. He found some breaded chicken covered in, what seemed to be, a sweet sauce. With a slight smile, he ordered a bowl of the food. "Thank you", he said. He looked around and found a small seat on a bench between stands. He ate quietly. As he was eating, he observed the crowd. Jing found many interesting looking faces, some that he would love to meet.

Things were lonely for Jing in the city. He knew almost no one, and only had correspondence with his mother and siblings on rare occasions. Jing really wanted a friend. There was no work for Jing today, since Mr. Songho thought he had been working quite hard lately and gave him the day off. He wondered what the day would hold.
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Jul 17, 2012 22:30:35 GMT -6

Post by min on Jul 17, 2012 22:30:35 GMT -6

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A small company had gathered around the poster across the way, talking restlessly amongst themselves. The street itself was so teeming with people that to observe them Min needed to stand tip-toe on doorstep. The group was, from what Min could see, quite the amalgam. Two teenage boys, dark haired and skinned, grimy from the factory. A middle aged couple, hands clasped tight, also of the working class. Two adults aged beyond their 25 or so years by work. And finally an older lady who distinguished herself among the middle class by the relative cleanness of her clothes. Though there was certainly some nuances in their respective attitudes - the teenage boys more eager, the couple more apprehensive - the prevailing mood of the gathering seemed one of anxiety. Logical - the sign played on their tensions. In declaring that non-benders were repressors, it instilled a subtle sense of fear - if benders were repressive, could they themselves be prosecuted for even reading the sign?

An ideal crowd for recruiting. Min adjusted the strap of her messager bag, filled now with a handful of pamphlets on top of her work documents and speech drafts. She had come from her job only an hour before, stopping briefly at home to snatch an apple and change into a more nondescript outfit; brown tights, a navy jacket over a black tunic, and a flat cap. It was important not to stand out amongst her targets, in addition to not being recognized as government worker, hence the cap. Readied, Min darted across the street as agile as minnow, integrating with the group.

"You see that poster?" She said, exuding calmness and amenity with the sound of her voice and open body language. The better to calm their nerves and earn their trust with. "It's the second we've put up - a fire-bender incinerated the first." She continued, motioning to the scorch marks scarring the wall where the previous poster had been. And that Min had simultaneous identified herself as an Equalist (in this demographic, so straightforward and wary, it was essential not to be unctuous or simpering or deceptive) and drew in the teenagers with her daring, humble tone. To the group, Min and by extension the Equalists were a group who weren't afraid to take action, even when threatened.

And with this Min began her process of recruiting, establishing herself as both a friend and an activist, offering personal anecdotes and receiving some in turn:

"What causes wars?" She said, "What causes crime, or abuse - abuse - of any sort, physical, economic." And here she paused, "An imbalance in power. And what is the most pervasive, discriminatory, divisive imbalance of power in our world? Bending."

"Yeah! That's right, remember, honey? When we tried to move to a better apartment in our building, or even to have the same utilities?" The husband of the couple spoke up, looking around and pausing for dramatic effect, "The landlord passed us over every time for that damned earthbender, just because he could repair everything with a flick of his hand."

Continuing her role as facilitator-energizer-recruiter, Min nodded eagerly (subliminally encouraging, she knew, the less enthused to become more involved) with the others, pleased that quite a few in the group were responding so well.

"You two are brothers, right? Who's the oldest?" The shorter of the two nodded, pleased Min had taken the care discern their relationship. In actuality, she had simply done her homework. Watch to see who gathered around the poster for a few days, if anyone repeatedly stops by, ask around. "Remember when you two were younger and you were stronger and faster than him and you'd pummel your brother just because you could? Because you had that feeling of superiority, power, and advantage?" Min finished jovially. The older boy grinned sheepishly, laughing when his brother socked him lightly on the arm. "Well, that's what bender's have, expect they don't grow out of that. And that's because their siblings, us non-benders, can't do push-ups or study to have that advantage. You can't compensate for bending. It's always the higher advantage. Sure, sometimes we succeed - but at what costs? How often? How many non-benders comprise the counsel?.."

This was to be Min's hopefully final point - she doubted the group would need more. She would get several fighters out of this group, the rest would probably be sympathizers. As such Min was concentrating so much on her speech, the level of emotion, her enunciation, her poise, that she did not notice the scowling woman approaching.
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Asami stood at the back of the crowd gathered around the woman in the cap who, despite the distance between them, could be easily heard. Everyone listening to her was silent. They clung to every word she said, speaking up only to mutter quietly among themselves or to loudly agree with what was being said. Her face tightened. This Equalist nonsense was absurd. She, more than most, knew what damage benders could do, but never once had she ever felt that benders as a whole were oppressive, cruel, or held some great advantage over the rest of society. They had been given a wonderful gift that should be celebrated, not protested. The Future Industries heiress remained silent throughout the woman's speech, but it quickly became more and more challenging to do so. This was all mere propaganda, lies and exaggerations and out-of-context assumptions. Children were children; they didn't understand that just because someone had more power that it was acceptable to use it. One couldn't accurately compare benders to brothers merely being brothers. For a group of people who complained of unfairness against non-benders, they seemed strangely willing to push the blame of a few benders upon many who had never done anything to harm another person.

By the time the woman in the cap had finished, she had heard more than enough. "This is ridiculous," Asami finally snapped, speaking up from the back of the crowd and perching her hands on her hips. Several onlookers nearby turned to look at her, some curious at what she had to argue and others sporting frowns matching her own, though for a different reason. "You can't blame all benders for the crimes of a few, or even for crimes they have nothing to do with." She turned to the couple who had spoken up previously. "The landlord didn't give you the apartment; how is that the earthbender's fault? He didn't ask to have that ability. It sounds like the landlord is the only one guilty of something." Asami then gestured to the Equalist recruiter. "You're crying injustice where there isn't any. The current council might be made up of benders, but that doesn't mean non-benders can't or haven't served on it. There are absolutely benders who abuse their power, and they specifically should be the ones you should be upset with. It's insane to be angry with someone just because they happen to have been born a bender."

In many ways, Asami knew that she had it much easier - she didn't have to live with many of the supposed imbalances between benders and non-benders that permeated Republic City. At the same time, she was a living example of how everything that the Equalist woman was saying was completely false. Her mother had been murdered by a firebender, but she understood that not all benders were this way. One person had killed her mother, and that was the only person who should be held responsible. She had trained for her entire life so that she could hold her own against benders, so she knew that it was entirely possible. Was it easy? Certainly not. It was not, however, as impossible as this woman made it sound. Non-benders were just capable of displaying as much strength, and as much evil, as any bender.

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Min, jaw clenching imperceptibly in annoyance, looked icily at the interloper who had cut into their midst. Her presence was rapidly becoming a challenge, and while Min enjoyed a good challenge, it irked her that she needed to adjust her plans when she had been so close to finishing. Now she'd have to commit more time while she could be recruiting new people; it bespoke inefficiency. But while this new, statuesque woman was certainly a roadblock and a nuisance, it was not a lost cause. Strategically Min knew she was in the better position, having had time to familiarize herself with the crowd and impart her philosophy. As the woman spoke Min's eyes darted from person to person, evaluating and executing mental triage. It was unlikely the couple or the boys would turn against her - the teenagers were practically in her pocket. However, Min could tell that the woman's opposition was exacerbating their eagerness into belligerence. The Equalist exhaled sharply. While she desperately wanted to avoid a fight, Min also knew she would lose their confidence if she failed to act. The older lady and the two other adults seemed more curious than anything else, although she detected some aggravation in the younger woman.

Tone was important. She needed to be unruffled, confidant, earnest. Min conceded (mentally, of course - one could skewer themselves giving ground) that several of the woman's arguments rang true. It was wrong to scapegoat the many for the crimes of the few. Min's own father was a firebender, and she knew that while he himself had never used his bender for evil, per se, he used it without malice, without violence, at the expense of others. Not to mention how it had been used against him; firebending was a thorn in his side, he didn't need it. But that was besides the point. And here Min interjected, sharp and clear. "This isn't just about crimes, but fundamental inequalities." She paused, looking hard at the listeners. They needed to be drawn in.

"Do you think the earthbender accidentally used his bending to win the landlords favor?" She looked seriously, questioningly at the couple, who muttered 'no.' "The landlord was being economical - the earthbender was being abusive, using an ability his neighbors couldn't possibly equal."
"And who is always going to get that construction job, the earthbender who can do the work of ten men barely lifting his arms, or the nonbender who has to use an expensive machine? All bender's exploit their ability - and just because it isn't their fault they can bend doesn't make it just or right. Even if a
bender doesn't "do" anything, they are and always will be favored simply because they can bend."
As she spoke Min turned slowly around the crowd, looking ardently at each face. "Can nonbenders legally serve on the council? Yes. Do they? Can they realistically do so? Do you see a single non-bender on that council?" A few cries of no and dark muttering emanated from the crowd.

The more they argued, the greater the polarizing effect on the group. Already Min could tell that some faces were beginning to set and harden - not all, she suspected, on her behalf. Others seemed more anxious to depart; a drawn out altercation was not what they wanted to be drawn into after a long day of work. With these quick observations Min changed tact, stepping closer to the intruder. Perhaps it would be possible to goad her with a more personal attack, or at least paint her as an enemy. The woman's apparent affluence would work against her, although it remained impossible to tell if she was a bender. "These are exactly the lies and false promises they use to seduce us into compliance. So what are you = the deceiver? The victim? The betrayer?" She prodded, an arms length away. Close enough to be a slight, but far enough away so not to be outright rude.
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Jing enjoyed the chicken very much. Back home, his food was never this good. There was more of an enforced "health" regiment in his home, reducing the amount of food that his mother considered unhealthy, which included basically anything tasty. When he had finished, he took out a rag from his satchel and wiped his bowl clean, then placed it back in his bag. He stood up and headed out to begin walking again.

Two of the stalls he saw caught his attention. One of them seemed to have quite a crowd, which instantly turned Jing off. The other, however, had a large gong hanging from it's opening, with a large Earth Kingdom emblem engraved on it. Those were common back home, it incurred a smile from Jing.

"Where did you get this piece?", Jing asked the man leaning over the service counter.

This man seemed to be a non-bender, apparent in his lack of any clothing indicating an element. Jing knew not to jump to such conclusions. Although his clothes were a bit drab, his face was extremely unique, in that he seemed to be missing his left eye entirely. His face displayed a small beard that reached from his jaw line, over his mouth, and back down.

The man uttered in a husky voice, "Omashu. I got it awhile back, though. Not for sale."

Jing inquired further, "Are you sure?.. It would really mean a lot to me."

"No."
"Bu-"
"NO."
"..What's your price?"

The merchant paused for a second. He was in an apparent deep thought. Then, he quipped "50,000 yuans!"

Jing stood there for a second and looked into his satchel. He barely had that amount. This piece would give him another piece of home. But, he could lose his current home if he does.

"...I'll take it."

Jing began to give the man the money. The merchant's jaw dropped; he never expected him to take the offer. Jing was very satisfied. This was his very first piece of decoration he bought for the apartment. As he lugged the large gong a few steps he realized that there had to be an easier way. Looking around for any feasible means of getting home, he spotted a man leaning against a blue Satomobile.

"Sir! Please, could you give me a ride?"

The man's head titled at Jing. He was obviously struggling, so the man must have thought it would be a good thing to do and nodded, allowing him the ride. Jing carried the gong as best he could to the Satomobile, then heaved it into the seat. Jing slid in and closed the door. After giving the man directions to his apartment, it wasn't long until he was at the door. The man offered to help him up to his apartment, but Jing declined. The man also refused payment, which utterly shocked Jing, but he didn't question it.

Once he had the gong in his apartment, he went to check his mail. Within his box he found a package from his mother. In this package was a few feet of deep blue cloth and 75,000 yuans. Luck seemed to be on Jing's side today. Jing didn't know whether he was happier about the new fabric for work, or the fact that he could pay his rent this month. But to prevent another situation of rash purchasing, he quickly locked 45,000 of the yuans in a safe he had under his bed. With a sigh, he stood back up, and headed out to explore the city again.
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Jul 20, 2012 16:19:32 GMT -6

Post by asami on Jul 20, 2012 16:19:32 GMT -6

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The woman wasn't happy. This assumption wasn't made due to any visible signs; in fact, Asami was almost impressed with her ability to keep her face clean of anything that remotely suggested irritation with the interruption. No, she knew that the woman was bothered by her speaking up because she was not the first Equalist that Asami had had the displeasure of coming across. They didn't like to be challenged. They were sprouting up as prevalently as weeds, and just as undesirably. Asami had no qualms with others voicing their opinions, but trying to persuade others to join a mission based on anger, self-pity and exaggerated injustices was something else entirely. Taking to the streets and preaching the message that benders were all inherently evil was appalling. In the mind of the Equalist, they were a victim and anyone who disagreed was just as bad as whoever had supposedly wronged them.

The tension in the crowd was tangible, and she didn't care. If things were tense, then that meant people were thinking. Hopefully, most of them would have enough sense to realize that they were only being manipulated. Asami scoffed. "All benders? What about the waterbending healers, or the metalbending officers, or the firebenders who help power this city? Is that exploiting their powers? Wouldn't it be worse if they didn't use their abilities to help other people?" If this woman could try and make a point that trying to heal someone's wounds or protect the city was a terrible thing, then there was no sense in continuing this conversation as far as Asami was concerned.

Her dark hair swayed as she turned to look apologetically over at the couple. "It's wrong that benders sometimes get preferential treatment, but that doesn't mean that bending itself is the problem, or that benders are all horrible people just because they're benders." Asami didn't know the landlord, nor the earthbender in question, so she was in no position to say with complete confidence who was the guilty party; both could have behaved poorly or neither could. For all they knew, the couple could be horrible tenants and the other man being an earthbender could have nothing to do with it. Either way, that specific instance wasn't the main point here. Benders did sometimes have it easier, as the Equalist woman said, but it was also as Asami said - having an advantage in one scenario or another did not make benders evil. Everyone had their own individual strength in a certain area. Being a bender did not automatically guarantee success. Asami's own father was evidence of that.

The girl's attention returned to the woman as she approached. Their close proximity did nothing to shrink Asami's posture; if anything, she now stood slightly more erect, her chin ever so lifted. She spoke no lies, would never consider herself a victim of any sort, and had never sworn any sort of allegiance to her fellow non-benders. This was not a matter of bender versus non. This was an issue between right and wrong. "None of the above," Asami said coldly. "I don't try to convince people of something using huge exaggerations. I don't pity myself and blame others for the things that happen to me. I'm not on a mission to vilify my fellow human beings just because I think they have it better than I do." Her green eyes slimmed, unmoving from the woman before her. "Can you say the same?"

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Jul 21, 2012 9:27:49 GMT -6

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Downtown was as busy as always. The buzz was constant, impossible to ignore. People rushing, never enough time in the day to complete their tasks. Merchants haggling with overly eager customers, some even bidding against each other for rare items or limited stock. Stands from all the Nations selling stock from each individual place of origin, proving popular to those not native of Republic City. It was quite a sight to behold, but one that looked exhausting.

Ottoya Goeng-Luk was not an enthusiastic person. The rush and madness of the heart of Republic City was impressive for sure, it was much more exciting than anything that happened in the Southern Water Tribe, but it was too hectic, too mad. Ottoya didn't want to be caught up in the wave of people, he just wanted to get what he needed and get out. Unfortunately that wasn't going to be the case, it was rush hour, it was the busiest time of the day, one could not simply grab what they needed. It took queuing, haggling and bidding before you were able to attempt your way out of the labyrinth of people. It was a million miles from Ottoya's comfort zone.

The Waterbender took one look at the chaotic mass and shook his head slowly. His long dark hair bounced on his shoulders as he turned away and headed in completely the other direction. He shoved his hands into his royal blue trousers and scuffed his brown snow-boots against the gravel. This place always seemed so lively, so why did it feel like it was dead?
Nothing interesting
There was never anything interesting, that was Ottoya's problem, he wasn't easily entertained. Letting out a sigh he made a mental note to check out Pro-Bending at some point, his father had convinced him of that at least. Other than that, he needed to be meeting people. Weren't there Nightclubs or something? Places where he could meet people more his age? Back in the South Pole, Ottoya knew one or two kids his age, but they all had other ambitions. They stayed and hunted, made a life for themselves back in the white wasteland. Ottoya had to change habitat, he had to adapt to the City life. He needed a new ambition.

Maybe he didn't need to go to social clubs... Maybe if he opened his eyes, he'd see there were people everywhere, opportunities to communicate. Yet the more the teenager looked, the less he saw. Gray clothing, forgettable faces. Old people, young children, drained adults... No one his age, no one who he would remember. No one worth talking to.
"This is too much effort" He muttered, folding his arms decisively.

Ottoya hated exerting himself, at this point he was getting annoyed that he had been in Republic City for two weeks and he had spoken to no one but his Father. It was easy for his Dad, the Firebender, he always had people around him at his little business.
Gray
It was easy for people who had lived here their entire lives, they went to school, places where you were forced to meet kids your age, forced to socialize and learn simultaneously. Forced to meet the demands and guidelines set by your elders.
Gray
It was easy for everyone but Ottoya, why was he the one struggling? Why was he so isolated? Maybe he should give up, go home and eat something. Listen to Pro-bending on the radio or throw a ball at a wall. It'd be more interesting than the infinite blandness of the pavement in front of him.
Green
It was so- Wait... Green?

That had caught the teenager's eye, Earth Kingdom attire. It was rare to see someone dressed in traditional attire, it symbolized that they were clearly not from this city, or just old fashioned. Judging by the guy's age, he guessed it was the former. This kid was not from Republic City. Neither was Ottoya, that much would have been evident from the deep blue Water Tribe get-up. Two outsiders living in the city. Right in front of him was his chance to socialize, the opportunity to kill this boredom, the end of his frustration.

And he walked right on past him without saying a word.
Damn it!
He had blown it, he had thought the situation to awkward. What was he supposed to say? 'Hey, want to hang out?', the guy was two or three years his younger, it'd just be weird. He probably had stuff to do anyway. The Water Tribe teen gritted his teeth and swore under his breath, continuing on his way.
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Jul 21, 2012 21:32:59 GMT -6

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After trudging through the fast paced stream of nameless faces that is Republic City, one can become quite weary. Yes, independence is great, but is it worth the loneliness that comes with moving to a huge city alone? Jing had been wrestling with that thought for quite a few days. He missed his brother who loved to wrestle and ruff-house, and always had a joke when Jing was feeling down. He missed his sister, who made life bearable, being the only person in his life who understood his passion for clothes and boys. He missed his mother, who always made him feel like he had a purpose, and never brought him or his confidence down. He didn't miss his greedy, angry father. His rage severed any feelings Jing used to have towards him, which hurt even more. All of this sadness, coupled with not knowing anyone besides his boss made living in Republic City hard.

But the drive for art and design made things less awful. The thought that someday he might be making the clothes that the true movers and shakers of Republic City were wearing thrilled Jing. Who needs friends when you have art?

But just as Jing was beginning to think that he was doing fine, he would see a group of young people having fun and laughing and smiling, and it would crush him. That is what Jing needed right now. Human compassion and companionship. Social interaction with people other than vendors or a sixty-seven year-old tailor. Occasionally it would become to much for him to bear, and he would cry. But never in public, he never let that happen.

Just as Jing's eyes began to water with these thoughts as he walked down the street, he saw this deep blue blur walking towards him. Jing quickly looked down and wiped his eyes. No one should see. He then raised his head and saw this man who seemed to be around his age, and almost to his height. Obviously from the Water Tribe. He seemed to be as out of place as Jing was. How could he not try to reach out to this other soul? You can't just wait for things to happen to you, you must make them happen.

While Jing was thinking all of this, the Water Tribe man had already walked past. Jing turned quickly around, seeing that the guy had not gotten too far. He walked behind him and reached out to him, putting his hand on his shoulder. Very risky in this city, but what did he have to lose?

"Umm, sir? I need to ask you a question."

A lie. What could he say now? He had to think of something.

"Where did you find those clothes? Whoever made them is extremely talented."

All Jing could hope for now was a polite answer, coupled with a "goodbye". If only he was more social.
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Jul 22, 2012 14:19:45 GMT -6

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Ottoya had a new goal, to go home and spend the evening staring at his ceiling. It seemed like a nice goal, an easy goal. It didn't require effort or awkward situations. It didn't require having to make conversation with people he knew. Was that it? Was he scared of meeting new people? No. He had met loads of new people back home, right? No... He had grown up with the fellow South Pole kids, he had always know them. That had to be it. This experience of meeting new people, it was alien to him, it went against what he knew. That was why he walked past the boy without saying anything.

But it takes two to have a conversation. Just as Ottoya hadn't spoken to the boy, the Earth Kingdom kid had not voiced himself either... But did he have to? The boy in green most likely was already antiquated with people, had contacts. Why would he have any desire to speak to some random guy on the streets?

What the Water Tribe boy needed was time. Give it a month, he'd meet people. He'd find a goal, a purpose and he'd chase it. This would be a new start, that was what all of this was about; moving to Republic City to start fresh. So why did everything feel the same?

The more Ottoya thought about things, the more frustrated he became with himself. He kicked another pebble, his head down. He wished he had his dark blue coat with him as he was starting to get a chill, plus he had a desire to hide his face.

And then a hand on his shoulder. That was strange. It wasn't a menacing hand that clamped above his arm, it wasn't malicious. Yet it wasn't warm either, not friendly... It was hard to describe the grip, it was... Steady.
"Umm, sir? I need to ask you a question." Came a voice, uncertain with hints of hesitation. The Waterbender turned around, the hand was gone as fast as it came, but it's owner stood in front of him. It was the kid in green. Who else could it have been? Ottoya was surprised nonetheless, not at who had approached him but as to why he had done such a thing. What did this guy want? Was he in the exact same boat as the teen from the South Pole? Was he having the same thought process about starting a social life? Meeting new people?

"Where did you find those clothes? Whoever made them is extremely talented." He finished.
Apparently not. He just wanted to know the origin of his clothes. The darker skinned boy let out a huff, this kid was wasting time that he needed to waste. Conversation. He should have been happy, a few moments ago he was annoyed that he had missed the chance to socialize, now he was angry that he was. But this wasn't socializing, this guy was just commenting on his attire.

The boy in blue bulked himself up, making himself taller than his fellow outsider. The icy blue eyes narrowed, his finger pointed at the guy's chest.
"I didn't find these clothes, Pal..." He prodded him in the chest, was this guy accusing him of stealing? The frown deepened, "I made them myself..." He lied, not really wanting to admit that his mother had made them for him, that just wasn't manly.
"And yeah! I'm talented... What's it to you, anyway?!" He folded his arms.

Well that was extremely harsh and rude. Was there any need to be so aggressive? This guy had done nothing wrong and yet Ottoya still felt he needed to show his aggression, he felt he needed to be in control. It was stupid, he was never going to make friends this way. He wouldn't blame the kid for just running and never speaking to him again.
Wow.
No wonder he didn't have a social life.
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Jul 22, 2012 20:33:56 GMT -6

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Now, Jing was never very fragile. Occasionally, yes, but not often at all. This city. This city had brought him to his emotional knees. It pushed him to this emotional brink where anything could make him snap. Why would someone with such good intentions in life receive the royal load of misfortune that has been dumped upon Jing? And then, without fail, this Water Tribe boy adds on to the heap.

Even with pure intentions, this man scorned him. Maybe it was Jing's fault; who is he to be friendly to someone he doesn't know? What one man considers kind could greatly offend another. But no matter how much rationalization Jing thought of, it didn't fix it. That hurt. The first time he tries to be social caused him the most pain that he had felt in months. It wasn't even the words the man said that did the damage, it was his tone. A tone that would make the sweetest phrase sound reminiscent of a death threat.

“I-I just wondered..” he struggled, “-because I they look really nice on you.” His face looked up at the man strongly, while his eyes were weaker than the rest of him. A few tears wandered down his face. But this quickly changed. He looked down to hide his face, and his hands clenched into two tight fists. “I'm sorry for saying anything, forgive me for trying to be friendly.”

Jing closed his eyes tightly to hold back the tears that were coming in rapid fire now. What was happening to him? He could feel this rage wash over him. Luckily, he was still able to control himself. He uttered a grizzly “Goodbye.”, and began to walk in the other direction. This was not the place to start a fight, who knows might join in. No person was worth going to jail over. But why did this guy have to be so sharp? Jing knew that people were different in the big city; he grew up in Ba Sing Se. It's not the same here, though. People just don't talk to you. And when they do, they have a tone. A tone that Jing could live without.

Although, no matter how angry he was, he secretly wished that this guy had been nicer. Maybe he could have made his first friend here. Loneliness seemed to be Jing's destiny.
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