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A year has passed since Fire Lord Zuko ascended the throne, and it seems like trouble is brewing between the Fire Nation and the Earth Kingdom once more. The Fire Lord and the Avatar began the Harmony Restoration Movement to restore the Fire Nation Colonies to their pre-war state by bringing any Fire Nation nationals back home, but for many of the citizens — of mixed Fire Nation and Earth Kingdom … Read more ›

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Yue's Return and Zuko's Gift

princessyuespirit5
Mar 27, 2006 18:59:36 GMT -6

Post by princessyuespirit5 on Mar 27, 2006 18:59:36 GMT -6

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Chapter 1
The Night of the Full Moon


It was a strangely cold spring day,and Katara, Aang, and Sokka were flying to the Fire Nation. Sokka was on his toes,ready to attack anything that moved. Everyone knew how he hated to go to the Fire Nation. But Aang had to learn fire bending,and his progress in Earth bending had been remarkable. Lust like Katara with Water bending. They soon stopped to rest at and oasis,where Katara could teach Aang more Water bending. "We should keep going," said Sokka,"the Fire Nation soldiers could show up any minute. "Just relax,Sokkka," said Katara as she showed Aang a move," The Fire Nation can't find us here." "Yeah Sokka,we should practice our fighting, for when we actually get to The Fire Nation," said Aang,in his consistently cheerful mood. "O.k," muttered Sokka, but something told him the Fire Nation was close. Later that night, they had found an abandoned hut near a waterfall. They decided to sleep there that cold night. But Sokka never slept,and it wasn't because they were at the border of the Fire Nation. No, he felt a strong presence in this hut,one that was strangely familiar. He then got up and looked outside. A full moon he thought,strange,very strange. Suddenly,a moon beam shot out of the sky. Sokka held his weapon in both hands,ready to strike. Where the moon beam hit the ground,a pattern in blue ink appeared. Upon closer inspection,he discovered that it was the insignia if the Water Tribe. Even more shocking, a figure had materialized in that spot. It glowed with moonlight,and calmness filled Sokka. Then the figure turned,with a beautiful pale face, deep blue eyes,and pure white hair. Only one word escaped from Sokka's shaking lips. "Yue."
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countryfire
Mar 29, 2006 17:42:21 GMT -6

Post by countryfire on Mar 29, 2006 17:42:21 GMT -6

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Yue?! Why's she back?! What's the gift Zuko gets?!

Oh, and if I might suggest something, perhaps you could use paragraphs? It's easier to read, and your writing deserves to be read easily.
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Post by Gia on Apr 15, 2006 13:44:33 GMT -6

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I agree. You need to seperate everything into paragraphs, and also, this is a bit confusing, because Yue can't return because she's the Moon Spirit now, but... I suppose that's why this is a fanfic...
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