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I don't want profesor Zei anymore...

karl
Jan 3, 2007 15:18:27 GMT -6

Post by karl on Jan 3, 2007 15:18:27 GMT -6

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Professor Zei looked out upon the vast dessert around him, and despaired. The library was here somewhere, but he just couldn't find it. His food was running short, and his ostrich horse had drunk the last of the water this morning, and, as it was a desert, the only water to be found was from a cactus. We all know exactly what happens when you drink cactus juice, don't we? Not something Professor Zei felt would help him.

The Head of Anthropology wasn't even sure whether or not the oasis was in the direction he was traveling. He wiped his tanned brow with his wrapped wrist, modeled after the style of the desert's sand tribes. Nasty people, they were, he had had multiple encounters with them in the past, and they had often cheated him, and had managed to force him into the desert without food or water, to wander about until he found a safe place with supplies. The war had drove them to this poverty, so he felt sympathy for them; but he hoped he wouldn't encounter them in his current state.

His thoughts shifted back to the library, and its vast collection of knowledge, more valuable than all of Ba Sing Sei. His older peers had told him before he left for the desert how foolish he was. The great wisdom owl spirit didn't exist, how could he have made a library? But Zei knew that Wan Sei Tong(sp) existed. The book about it had been written by the great historian Falstesti Moni himself, and he had never been proven wrong before. The library existed, he would find it, and when he did, he would spend his life in pursuit of the knowledge it contained, billions of priceless tomes that he could spend his life perusing. This vision gave him strength in the darkest times, kept him cheerful even when all seemed lost. It was his hope that he drew upon now, in the heat and horror of the day.

The ostrich horse faltered, one foot sank into the sand. The marginally young professor fell to the ground, grunting as he struck the sand. He climbed to his feet, and dug out the bird's foot before climbing back aboard. It was a sign of his thirsty delirium that he talked to his mount.

"Don't worry, we'll be fine. Just you wait." The sun scorched from above, and he was glad for his hat. But he had nothing to do. It was so hot... He drifted to the lands of dreams against the ridable animal's neck. Every once in a while, he would jerk awake on a hard step, but mostly he slept, hat shading him from the sun that blazed so arrogantly from above.

The Headmaster had not approved of his expeditions into the desert. They were dangerous. Sandbenders and Fire Nation could catch him. And he wasn't sure whom was worse. The war hadn't reached Ba Sing Sei, and only the staff at the university even knew of it. But Zei was twenty-seven, young and idealistic, so he left anyways, headless of the war. The Fire Nation never hurt him in his travels, the sandbenders did. His fruitless search for the library of the great knowledge spirit and even the sand tribe's cruelty did not dissuade him, he still optimistically believed he could find the library. He always would.

The Head of Anthropology woke with a feeling of peace and renewed hope. And he saw, in the distance, a beautiful oasis. Urging his horse forward, the man smiled. He would find the library yet! His optimism had never failed him before, for in the desert, the elements may be harsh, the people may be unscrupulous, but the truest and deadliest enemy was losing hope. Professor Zei could not lose hope, even when his body slowly dehydrated and his blood-pressure plunged, he continued to hope and move forward.

He was within three hundred yards of the oasis- oh what a beautiful sight- when suddenly, his mount's feet were grabbed by the desert, seeming to come alive at his feet. The professor was flung forward, falling off the front of the ostrich-horse, and his the ground hard. He suddenly realized what was going on, fancies of a living desert fading way as he saw the group of sandbenders approach. His heart sank, they would take his animal, his gold, and defile his map. He stood, aching from the impact and made for his horse, his thirst wracked body moving slwer than needed, but the sand benders bent his ankles and feet to the ground, and the rest of his body soon joined them against the blazing hot desert sand. He felt a sudden burst of pain in the back of his head, and fell unconscious. This time, he didn't dream.
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Last edit by karl: Feb 4, 2007 12:30:31 GMT -6

Post by A Long Display Name Here on Jan 3, 2007 16:53:08 GMT -6

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Thanks for applying!

Now, there were a few problems, in my opinion, with your application. First of all, there was nothing in there about how the war affected the professor. Secondly, there's not much expansion into his character. Remember, since the Professor is a minor character, you have a bit of artistic license with him.

My biggest concern, however, is post length. Granted, it's longer than the minimum length, but I dont see any depth to what you've written. It's almost as if you were just trying to fill up space.

So, for now, I'm going to have to say no. There are, however, five other mods that will review your application, so best of luck.
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kusari
Jan 3, 2007 19:00:38 GMT -6

Post by kusari on Jan 3, 2007 19:00:38 GMT -6

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Hmm...you could have expanded on the little you had about the war affecting him. Also, I agree with Katara, there wasn't much depth. For now, I'm going to say no, but if you change it, I might choose otherwise.

Good luck =]
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Jan 3, 2007 21:18:33 GMT -6

Post by Deleted on Jan 3, 2007 21:18:33 GMT -6

I can't really agree with you two I didn't really see and get much of Zei's personality in the show, and what I got was kind of the same as what he wrote. I liked the fact that you showed the ambition of this man, but that was about all the up I can give you; like I said before don't know much about him.

I say yes.

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karl
Jan 4, 2007 15:29:43 GMT -6

Post by karl on Jan 4, 2007 15:29:43 GMT -6

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The thing about Professor Zei was, in my opinion, the creators of Avatar managed to create a character in which was extremely well defined, if rather one-sided, in the space of one episode. I can take licence with his past, but his personality is basically defined. And the war affecting part, the point kind of was that it hadn't affected him, being raised in Ba Sing Sei and traveling to the desert without many problems with the fire nation.

Of course, the depth thing is something I need to work on...

EDIT: Okay, I added the last paragraph because I just had to have him be attacked by sandbenders. However, if the sandbending thing is like powerplaying, I'd be glad to remove it.
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Last edit by karl: Jan 4, 2007 15:42:27 GMT -6

Post by Gia on Jan 7, 2007 1:30:13 GMT -6

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Okay, I don't think the war affecting him is an issue, because as you said, he was born and raised in Ba Sing Se, so it hasn't really touched him. However, I would have liked to see more of his history, how he found out about the Library, things like that. So, I'll have to agree with Katara and Kusari and say no until you change this.
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karl
Jan 7, 2007 12:19:43 GMT -6

Post by karl on Jan 7, 2007 12:19:43 GMT -6

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His thoughts shifted back to the library, and its vast collection of knowledge, more valuable than all of Ba Sing Sei. His older peers had told him before he left for the desert how foolish he was. The great wisdom owl spirit didn't exist, how could he have made a library? But Zei knew that Wan She Tong(sp) existed. The book about it had been written by the great historian Falstesti Moni himself, and he had never been proven wrong before. The library existed, he would find it, and when he did, he would spend his life in pursuit of the knowledge it contained, billions of priceless tomes that he could spend his life perusing. This vision gave him strength in the darkest times, kept him cheerful even when all seemed lost. It was his hope that he drew upon now, in the heat and horror of the day.


Better?
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Post by A Long Display Name Here on Jan 10, 2007 17:19:22 GMT -6

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Eehhhh....

Still not enough depth in my opinion. I'm so sorry! Could you edit just one more time for me please? Thanks... *feels horrid*
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karl
Jan 12, 2007 5:18:42 GMT -6

Post by karl on Jan 12, 2007 5:18:42 GMT -6

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Okay, I added a few sentences and clauses throughout the piece, mostly on the subject of his personality. His appearance is vague, I'm not very good at describing people. If that isn't enough depth, I'm afraid there never will be here and I should probably not get such a... Wait, he's a minor character; the real problem would me being unable to post real posts. Well yeah. That. Okay, basically, one more word needs to be said.

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Post by A Long Display Name Here on Jan 17, 2007 16:28:31 GMT -6

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*claps* VERY GOOD. Much better in terms of length and description. See, I knew you could do it! ^_~

*STAMP STAMP STAMP*

(now only if you could do that in your battle training with kiku.... *mutter* ;P )
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Post by Gia on Jan 18, 2007 23:58:51 GMT -6

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*STAMP* He's yours, Minamo... Oh, and we love your enthusiasm in applying for Canons, and you're a good RPer, but we have a limit of 3. :)
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Post by A Long Display Name Here on Feb 1, 2007 12:42:21 GMT -6

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CORE STAFF:
Only one more approval is needed. Thanks.
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